second draft - questionnaire

Short film - Second draft

From my first draft I noticed that from the feedback on my first draft, the sound needed improving. There is one scene with is still unfinished which is the laptop scene as I wanted to record the laptop screen and overlay it on the actors face so you could see the actor and the laptop screen. I manged to record some clips using a free screen recorder however the quality was poor and the file type wasn't compatible with the editing software I'm using so I will have to do some further research.

First draft Questionnaire

My First Draft