As well as some paper copies I have found that my target audience thought my first draft worked well as a short film. Areas I found I could improve on were:
- Sound - add some music to help build some tension towards the end
- The first clips appear to be too grainy due to lack of light so I could re film these scenes
- The laptop scene didn't make sense however this is due to most scenes not being presented in the first draft
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